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- fairytale -




Once upon a time,
she was beautiful.
But then again,
that was only the beginning

Tangled in an intricate web,
both of you were slowly drowning.
Intoxicated by the lies and addicted to the deceit-
unable to come up for breath,
together you would fall deeper into the deluge,
through the hidden depths of your mind.
For the moment your scathing fingertips brushed,
nothing would be of concern
save the poisoned lust in your hearts,
and the sickening impulses of your bodies.

The moon would always cover for you,
through each and every sullen night.
It would watch in shame and shake its head
but nevertheless remained your ally.
And then through the darkness you would feel her there
a tepid presence, breathing heavily -
silent but deadly.
The fear was the warmth, and the guilt the passion.
They translated justly into your secret language.

And as you lay dangerously entwined -
as the world faded, and the night overcame,
all that existed were the dreams of freedom and bliss;
nightmares in another life, trapped within another world.
But when the suffocating sun arrived to claim its reign,
both your vile souls would be quick to depart.

Then you'd watch her,
- often close enough to smell her scent.
sharing sweet kisses, gifts and promises,
and always in the strong arms of someone you both loved.
The protective hold of the only being in the dying world,
that would ever trust you with their life.

But in realm with that fairytale,
the dream would end at midnight -
and running away from her prince,
she'd come to you quickly with the stars overhead.
The moon would turn its head, and as it grew black,
you'd already be together, sinning with bitter ecstasy.
Faster and faster, together at last.
But not once were it a happy ever after,
for she was always careful to never leave a glass slipper.

Yes, she was beautiful, but she smiled so painfully.
And you never existed within the spectrum of the rainbow.
So alongside every secret kiss,
and every hidden night burdened with betrayal
the end began to dawn near.
One morning the glass house would fall in,
and shatter you both.

So, soon it would be time for one final good-bye.
A farewell to vivid delusions.
And the start of something old.
But until then both of you understood perfectly.
Because she was beautiful,
and the moon would always be there-
ready for that final happily every after.
©2006-2009 ~crimsonlipstick22
:iconcrimsonlipstick22:

Author's Comments

I wrote this such a long time ago, but I decided now was the time to re-edit it, and make it work better.

I hope everyone likes.




I still have the old version, I think, somewhere. But not too much was changed.

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:iconmonnie-the-panda:
wow..this is really really beautiful. i love it!
:iconcrimsonlipstick22:
Thanks very much ^_^

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The shortest horror story in the world:

The last man on earth sat in a room.
There came a knock on the door.
:iconweetbix:
and then there was the night that never seems to pass.. :P
I like the metophors and smilies :aww: they're beautiful
:iconcrimsonlipstick22:
Thankyou so much :) I like the bit you wrote, it's very nice :blackrose:

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The shortest horror story in the world:

The last man on earth sat in a room.
There came a knock on the door.
:iconephodine:
*blinks* wow.. deep
I do like this, yes i do :)
I love the similies and metaphors etc.. like weetbix said lol, but I also love the way the words and the way the meanings seem to entwine in a deliciously dark manner. And yes, i said delicious.
And sophisticated. Very sophisticated *refrains from taking the self-bait*
ha

:blackrose: Ephodine

PS: I talk crap. All the time. And don't worry if you don't really get what it is I just said, just be glad I said it lol

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:heart:

Impossible is nothing.


Avatar: ~Falln-Avatars
:iconcrimsonlipstick22:
Thankyou, my fine feline friend! I like your phrase 'deliciously dark manner', it's very you ;) Yes, I know sophisitcation! I'm so going to cut of the end of my skirt tommorow, ha nobody's gonna get that but us crazy two :D


Btw, I've just nearly finished my essay! And i did my human bio homework too. Now onto my history homework, and to study for my tests tommorow...

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The shortest horror story in the world:

The last man on earth sat in a room.
There came a knock on the door.
:iconephodine:
lol! thankyou.. it IS so me..
and there is nothing better than an inside joke lol.. one that your in-side of :)
and i havent even started my essay. How fucking rude of me. I should start it.. soon..
ok, cya in hell

:blackrose: Ephodine

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:heart:

Impossible is nothing.


Avatar: ~Falln-Avatars
:iconserpentofshadows:
I love the images in this... :hug: Very well done.

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I'm allergic to death. Whenever I come into contact with it, I become all pale and sickly looking.

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